Frank J Zsoldos / Copywriter / Creative Director
            In hindsight, I think I overloaded this email with content.  I tried to achieve too many different goals.            
Whole sections could have been eliminated.
A tighter focus would have given this execution more impact, and saved valuable content for the next.
Messaging was just wasted, pushed so far beneath the fold here.
Original Mitsubishi Handraiser Email
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Shortened Mitsubishi Handraiser Email: Top Half
Shortened Mitsubishi Handraiser Email: Bottom Half